The first camera exercise

We have framed the shots well, using a variety of different shots. Our video contains many shots high angle shots to low angle shots with a variety of close ups and mid shots. we have used a number of shots making this video more complex than a simple shot.
The video has good pace however it is difficult to capture a good atmosphere. Overall the video flows well however it does contain a jump that does not flow well.
The video could be improved by adding better flow and transitions, also we could have had better control over the background noise during the shooting, this would make it a more polished piece.